Revise With Confidence

You’ve finished your manuscript, but now you’re not sure if your story is really working or how to make it stronger. Maybe you’re worried about plot holes, pacing that drags, characters that fall flat, or whether your story will connect with readers.

That’s exactly where developmental editing comes in.

As a developmental editor, I provide big-picture feedback on the heart of your novel—structure, plot, pacing, character arcs, and setting—to make sure every element is pulling its weight. My goal isn’t just to help you fix this draft, but to give you the tools and insight to become a stronger writer overall.

With clear guidance and actionable feedback, you’ll move forward with confidence to bring your novel one step closer to publication.

Over-the-shoulder view of a woman sitting on a couch writing in a notebook, representing developmental editing services for novelists who want feedback on plot, pacing, and character development.
  • "As soon as I saw Lisa's developmental edit of my document, I knew she was as invested as I am in making my story shine. Her insights helped bring out the best of my story."

    Addison Lea, Romance Author

  • "Lisa has a great eye for what makes a manuscript work: tension, conflict, pacing, character arc...you name it. She gave specific feedback and suggestions in places where something wasn't working, all with a positive, helpful approach."

    Jen Craven, Women’s Fiction Author

  • "Lisa is an outstanding developmental editor. I’m astonished by her talent of seeing details and the big picture at the same time. I could tell how much she cared about my book and feel I have the best possible first step in my publishing process."

    C. D’Angelo, Women’s Fiction Author

Editing Services

Manuscript Evaluation

A manuscript evaluation is a big-picture overview of your story and the issues that need attention.

What’s Included:

✅ A detailed edit letter reviewing the big picture of your manuscript, including areas of strength and areas for improvement with guidance for revision

✅ In-manuscript comments on your first chapter to help guide you further and give some examples of how you can make suggested changes

✅ Follow-up feedback on up to 10 revised manuscript pages of your choosing

✅ Additional resources I feel might be helpful for you in understanding the concerns with your manuscript and how to fix them (where applicable)

Great for Writers Who:

❊ Want professional feedback on their manuscript but may not have the budget for an in-depth edit

❊ Are more experienced with the revisions process and just want an overall analysis of the aspects that aren't working in their manuscript

❊ Are able to take more general feedback and apply it to specific instances within their manuscript

Your Investment: $0.008 per word

Deep Dive Developmental Edit

A deep dive developmental edit takes a manuscript evaluation one step further with in-manuscript comments for the entire story.

What’s Included:

✅ A detailed edit letter reviewing the big picture of your manuscript, including areas of strength and areas for improvement with guidance for revision

✅ In-manuscript comments throughout the entire manuscript to give you specific recommendations for how to improve the weaknesses identified in the edit letter.

✅ Follow-up feedback on up to 25 revised manuscript pages of your choosing

✅ Additional resources I feel might be helpful for you in understanding the concerns with your manuscript and how to fix them (where applicable)

Great for Writers Who:

❊ Want thorough professional feedback on their entire manuscript and specific, tailored guidance on how to revise concerns identified

❊ Have struggled to apply general feedback gained from critique partners or beta readers

❊ Are ready to take a deep-dive into their manuscript, evaluate every potential big-picture concern, and make their manuscripts as strong as they possibly can be

Your Investment: $0.015 per word

Want to add a coaching call to discuss my feedback?

Add a one-hour coaching call to your editing service to discuss my feedback in greater detail, ask questions, and/or discuss a plan for revision.

Your Investment: $100

Ongoing revision coaching packages also available. Contact me for a personalized quote.

Not Ready for a Full Edit?

Try a First Chapter Critique

Get professional feedback on your first chapter without committing to a full manuscript edit. In this critique, I’ll review your opening and give you actionable next steps to strengthen your story, hook readers, and gain momentum.

What you get:

  • Detailed feedback on your first chapter

  • Insights on plot, pacing, characterization, and voice

  • Clear, actionable guidance to move your manuscript forward

Price: $75

Frequently Asked Questions

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